Thursday 6 February 2014

Author, Writer or Someone Who Writes
There have been many articles and blog posts about when you can call yourself a writer. When you're published, when you earn money from your writing, when you spend much of your time writing? I know it felt strange when I included 'writer' on my bio for Twitter the first time back in 2011. Was I worthy of that title?

Well, on Monday I was called an author for the first time! Some of you will know that I've just returned from visiting my grandsons in Manchester. Isaac who is six and in Year 1 has been looking at authors and illustrators as part of a class topic. He told me all about Julia Donaldson and her illustrator, Alex Scheffler, and knew a number of her books in addition to 'The Gruffalo'.

'I told my teacher you're an author, Nana,' Isaac said. 

It is true that when I retired I wrote a chaptered story for Tom, his older brother, about a little boy who was born in Wales but then moved to Manchester. His secret friend, Dewi the Dragon, joined him in mischief each time he came to Wales on a visit. It was the first fiction writing I'd done for many years and when it was finished and checked I naively sent it off to Pont who had published two Teachers' Notes non-fiction books of mine a few years before. It was rejected - four years on, I can now see why - and so I decided to have enough copies printed for friends and family at a local book-binders. I typed it up and used family photos and Google images for illustrations.


A published author in the writing group that I joined some time afterwards told me I should not have put 'by' before my name - a dead give-away to the book's amateur status - but Tom and Isaac don't seem to mind. Isaac took the book in for his teacher and classmates to see the next day, proud that Nana is an author in his eyes!


He asked if I would write a book for him and before I left on Tuesday night, we planned a story together including the characters he wanted to be in it. How can I refuse my biggest fan?

I do find writing for children hard, though. 'Tom and His Secret Friend' was far too long and wordy. It had the feel of an adult narrating the story rather than the story being aimed at children throughout. Even now after a few years' writing experience, I don't seem to be able to get the voice right. I often write in the first person when writing stories for adults but I don't think it would work in Isaac's story. Do you write for children? How do you ensure the main viewpoint is that of the child? Any tips and advice would be gratefully received.
  

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  1. You've got no choice about writing that book, now! I'm sure you can come up with something they'll love.

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    1. Thanks, Patsy. Yes, I'll have to get going now. I've been talking about writing one since I finished Tom's!

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  2. I think by and your name is alright Jan. Have a look here
    http://www.amazon.co.uk/Summer-Holidays-Susan-Jones-ebook/dp/B00DYBFY5S
    I boldly self published a story, written from a boy's point of view. I like it, but nobody has given a review yet. Maybe that's a good thing.......

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    1. Oh, yes, I can see you've done the same. I'll download your book. I like the idea of it being written from the boy;'s POV. It sounds as if it could help me with my 'problem' - cheers, Sue!

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  3. I have never attempted writing for children Jan, so can't offer any helpful advice I'm afraid. But, I think it's really special for Tom to have had his Nana write a story especially for him, that's a lovely idea. And, yes...you are going to have to write one for Isaac now too! Hope it goes well!

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    1. Thanks, Sam. Yes, I must at least get the ideas down and then the 'voice' can be worked on in the edit.

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  4. I haven't written anything for children either, Jan, but I love the idea of you writing the book for your grandson.

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    1. Thanks, Wendy. No excuses for me not to write it now!

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