© Janey Stevens |
Second
Book Syndrome & Ghost Writing
Received wisdom insists the second novel is the tricky one.
Since Snow Sisters is the easiest
book I’ve ever written I could be forgiven for arguing the point.
With the small success of my first novel Ghostbird, there was an expectation that
a second book would at the very least be as good as its predecessor. Telling
myself being published at all was sufficient unto itself, I imagined I was
resisting the pressure. Right? Wrong! I’m a writer and one of the things being
traditionally published did for me was confer a level of validation. It gave me
permission to write; I was good enough and there was no reason not to write another book. Nevertheless,
it was scary – I scared myself thinking about it – the difficult second novel.
After Ghostbird
was released my publisher asked me what else I was working on. I told her, held
my breath, concerned she might consider the subject matter too much like Ghostbird. Having been reassured that
‘in a similar vein’ was the way to go, I breathed out and scurried off to
carrying on writing the story that was to become Snow Sisters.
But here’s the thing: technically, it wasn’t my second
novel. Languishing in limbo was a story I affectionately referred to as ‘River’
book. I’d completed several messy drafts long before Ghostbird was accepted and before Snow Sisters was even a glimmer. The problem with it was, however
much I liked the story – and I did – I’d never been convinced of its
credibility. Writing it had been challenging and laborious. Text book second
book syndrome, right? Right.
With Ghostbird
accepted, I’d set River aside, assuming I would pick it up and continue
wrestling with it once my writing life returned to normal. Meanwhile, the idea
for Snow Sisters came unexpectedly
and out of left field. Even before my publisher confirmed it, I sensed it could
be the perfect follow-up to Ghostbird.
River wasn’t a ghost story and Snow
Sisters most definitely was. Janey, my friend and writing co-conspirator,
read the outline and insisted it had muscle. To my surprise, I wrote it in
record time.
And a small ghost-voice whispered, ‘Why are you so
surprised? It’s your third…’
When people ask me if I believe in ghosts I tell them I
believe in the possibility of them. The same way I believe in the possibility
of magic – the kind found in the everyday, requiring little more than a
suspension of disbelief to render my reader temporarily enchanted.
The truth is, I never set out to write ghost stories. When I
began conjuring Ghostbird, my ghost
was a vague shadow. She was little more than a device; a tenuous link between
her twelfth century mythical origin and my contemporary setting. It was only
when my mentor, Janet Thomas, insisted the ghost needed to be heard that I began to understand I might be writing an authentic
ghost story. And so it proved – as I fleshed out the ghost’s voice I realised
how much I was enjoying myself.
How I envisage Angharad |
Looking out through a Victorian window at the snow |
When it came to writing Snow
Sisters, it was the ghost who came first – insistent and vocal. Angrier
than little Dora in Ghostbird, and
with an agenda, there was nothing tentative about Angharad’s voice. Woken by an
act of kindness, her ghost dominated the narrative from the beginning and her
story pretty much wrote itself.
As for River – what can I say? Already another ghost is
nudging me – leaving her irresistible, half-voiced agenda in the outer reaches
of my consciousness. She ‘keeps up her
hauntings by day and night’* and I
know who she is; I know what she wants. I know where she lives and who she’s
going to haunt. And it’s nowhere near a river.
* Virginia Woolf
Carol reading from Snow Sisters at the book launch in Lampeter |
Two
sisters, their grandmother’s old house and Angharad, the girl who cannot leave…
Verity and Meredith Pryce live with their
fragile mother, Allegra in an old house overlooking the west Wales coast. Gull
House is their haven. It also groans with the weight of its dark past. When
Meredith discovers an old sewing box in a disused attic and a collection of
handstitched red flannel hearts, she unwittingly wakes up the ghost of
Angharad, a Victorian child-woman harbouring a horrific secret. As Angharad
gradually reveals her story to Meredith, her more pragmatic sister remains
sceptical until Verity sees the ghost for herself on the eve of an unseasonal
April snowstorm. Forced by Allegra to abandon Gull House for London, Meredith
struggles. Still haunted by Angharad and her unfinished story, hurt by what she
sees as Verity’s acquiescence to their mother’s selfishness, Meredith drifts
into a world of her own. And Verity isn’t sure she will be able to save her…
Thank you, Carol. I love the fact that, in Snow Sisters, it was the ghost of Angharad who came first and that there's now another one already waiting in the wings for you in your 'River' book.
My Thoughts on Snow Sisters: 5 *****
Snow Sisters is a superbly crafted novel, written in figurative language that often borders on poetry. I was captivated with the story from beginning to end. Throughout the book, stunning descriptive settings transport the reader straight into the world of sisters, Verity and Meredith. I loved the sound of Mared's blue garden, with its back story of the blue poppy; the snow-angel scene that takes place there is magical. Carol has created memorable, well-rounded female characters, exploring the relationship between sisters as well as between mothers and daughters. Allegra often exasperated me in her ineptitude as a mother and the effect her selfish decision to move to London had on Meredith, especially. The parallel stories of the present day and that of Angharad, the ghost of a previous inhabitant of Gull House who has a tragic secret, are woven together seamlessly, enabling the novel to flow. Written in the first person, Angharad's story reflects her class and the time in which she lived. This is storytelling at its best, delivered in beautiful prose, by a very talented writer. I highly recommend Snow Sisters and look forward to reading more of Carol's work.
LINKS:
Honno: www.honno.co.uk/
Amazon: https://www.amazon.co.uk/Snow-Sisters-Carol-Lovekin/dp/1909983705/ref=tmm_pap_swatch_0?_encoding=UTF8&qid=&sr=
Website: Making It Up As I Go Along
Twitter: @carollovekin
Snow Sisters is a superbly crafted novel, written in figurative language that often borders on poetry. I was captivated with the story from beginning to end. Throughout the book, stunning descriptive settings transport the reader straight into the world of sisters, Verity and Meredith. I loved the sound of Mared's blue garden, with its back story of the blue poppy; the snow-angel scene that takes place there is magical. Carol has created memorable, well-rounded female characters, exploring the relationship between sisters as well as between mothers and daughters. Allegra often exasperated me in her ineptitude as a mother and the effect her selfish decision to move to London had on Meredith, especially. The parallel stories of the present day and that of Angharad, the ghost of a previous inhabitant of Gull House who has a tragic secret, are woven together seamlessly, enabling the novel to flow. Written in the first person, Angharad's story reflects her class and the time in which she lived. This is storytelling at its best, delivered in beautiful prose, by a very talented writer. I highly recommend Snow Sisters and look forward to reading more of Carol's work.
LINKS:
Honno: www.honno.co.uk/
Amazon: https://www.amazon.co.uk/Snow-Sisters-Carol-Lovekin/dp/1909983705/ref=tmm_pap_swatch_0?_encoding=UTF8&qid=&sr=
Website: Making It Up As I Go Along
Twitter: @carollovekin
Thank you for reading Carol's post. Do you believe in ghosts or, as Carol says, maybe in the possibility of them? Are you a writer, writing your second novel? I'd love it if you left a comment.
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You may also follow me on Twitter @JanBayLit and on my Jan Baynham Writer Facebook page.
Thank you so much Jan - for the generosity of your review & for having my on your blog. I wish you all the success in the world with your own writing & career. I know how hard you work & how dedicated you are. We're all in this together! xXx
ReplyDeleteIt's a pleasure, Carol. I was delighted to be part of the blog tour for your amazing book. Thank you for your good wishes, too.
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DeleteThoroughly enjoyed reading Carol's guest post and your review too, Jan. Can't wait to start reading my copy of Snow Sisters.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sara. It was interesting to hear how 'Snow Sisters' became Carol's second book. I know you'll love it; it's yet another special book from Honno, like yours.
DeleteFor me thewre's always a point when the current book seems like the hardest I've ever written – but then there are also stages where things are going well and it seems like the easiest.
ReplyDeleteYes, sometimes you think this is never going to work out and when it does, you think differently about the book. Thanks for popping by, Patsy.
DeleteSnow Sisters sounds like a beautiful, intriguing book. It is always interesting to learn how stories develop and Carol clearly has a close and productive relationship with her mentor, who encouraged her to listen to the ghost in the tale, which in turn helped Carol understand that this needed to be a proper ghost story. How wonderful to work so closely with someone who understands your writing so well. PS I adore the photo of 'Angharad.'
ReplyDeleteI'm so pleased you like the sound of Carol's book, Sue. I highly recommend it. Working with a mentor sounds wonderful, I agree. The picture Carol has chosen for Angharad fits her so well in the book and is evocative of her era, I think.
DeleteVery thhoughtful blog
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