Thursday 13 March 2014

Pleased to meet you
I often say this when I meet someone for the first time but what about characters in stories? This week, I have been thinking about how well I know my characters. I often write in the first person so I have been a female hoarder in her early thirties, a high flying executive who stops to give a lift  to a teenage girl who died thirty years before, a twenty-something male stalker for whom 'killing her was not part of the plan', a mum-to-be living in a haunted cottage, a father meeting the son he didn't know existed for the first time and a baby girl taking her first unaided steps! I am none of these people so 'writing what you know' has not been the case. When I met them for the first time, I had to find out more about them to hopefully make them credible. 


In short stories, we don't have time to explore our characters in the same detail that we can in a novel but the characters still need to read as real people, with real emotions and feelings. When I'm reading a short story I need to be able to relate to that person, to like or dislike him or her, to understand the conflict or dilemma that presents itself. When writing from a character's point of view, I like to get inside the character's head and tap into the thought processes.  Sometimes, as with the hoarder and the stalker, I have had to research some real life stories in order to do that. Very often, I've found that the most credible characters have an inner contradiction that doesn't reveal itself until the story unfolds and then I really get to know them.

Teagan Kearney has written an excellent blog post this week on constructing character in WRITING MY NOVEL NO WORKING TITLE YET . She makes the point that her characters are often incomplete when she begins to write and they develop as the novel progresses. She talks about the inner conflict a protagonist has to battle with and how this emerges as she gets to know the character better, thereby creating tension. Here is a direct quote from Teagan:

Having both internal and external conflicts are crucial. Readers become emotionally involved with characters, and how your character perceives the threat is what draws readers in - and keeps them captivated. 

In my own novel, Jack is a very fiery, volatile character on the surface and everyone has to walk on eggshells around him but deep inside he is a very vulnerable, insecure person. I'm hoping that this will reveal itself to the reader as the story progresses.  





I have just read 'Gone Girl' by Gillian Flynn. The complexity of the two main characters and the way I reacted to them at different stages of the story certainly drew me in and kept me turning the pages. What book has had the same effect on you recently?



Thank you for reading and please comment on how you construct your characters. 


**One of my short stories, 'Unfinished Business' was published yesterday on Alfie Dog Fiction If you'd like to download it, please click on the link.**

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8 comments:

  1. Excellent post Jan! I am very glad you get into your character's head through research, I really thought you were going to say you actually stalked people - haha!

    I am currently loving being able to delve more deeply into my character's minds for my novel, as opposed to the characters in short stories. However, there is an element of prior knowledge for me as I have gone with the usual advice of 'write what you know' - having said that, I am having to go the extra mile to get inside my male antagonist's head!

    I really enjoyed Gone Girl (wonder how the film will fair?). The last book that I felt the way you describe is The Cry, by Helen Fitzgerald. Hope your novel is coming along well :)

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    1. Thanks, Sam. I'll have a look at 'The Cry'. Glad you're enjoying delving into the characters in your novel. I'm doing a lot of thinking and planning at the moment but I really need to just get the ideas written down now. I keep getting way laid writing short stories where you feel the sense of achievement much more quickly!

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  2. Creating a character is just like meeting somone new. To start with we know very little, perhaps just a name, but as we see how they react to the situations they're in and to other people, we learn a lot about them.

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    1. Yes, Patsy. Very often it's their reactions that give us far more insight into their characters. That's what's so exciting, I suppose, when we have created a credible character that the reader will be able to relate to. 'Showing' at its best!

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  3. I think creating characters is one of the things I love most about writing. Seeing them come to life and learning about them as I write is a great feeling x

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    1. Yes, Teresa. As I do more writing, I'm seeing how my characters are becoming more real when I delve deeper to find out more about them. Thanks for posting. :-)

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  4. I never really plan what my characters are like - they just take over. Interestingly a lot of protagonists are men.

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    1. You have confirmed what other writers have said, Wendy, and now I have more writing under my belt, I'm starting to see that too. I hope that means I'm making progress on my journey to becoming a writer! I have written a number of stories where the main character is a male but where I have I've tended to write in first person.

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